Would I be a candidate for revision rhinoplasty?

Hello, and thank you for providing images along with your question. There can still be some residual swelling at the 6-month mark because it takes a full year for the nose to heal and achieve full rhinoplasty results. If you are still unsatisfied after a full year, schedule a consultation with a reputable board-certified facial plastic surgeon, particularly one with extensive experience in rhinoplasty.
Revision rhinoplasty is even more complex than primary rhinoplasty and requires advanced skill and technique. During your consultation, your surgeon will evaluate your nose and determine your eligibility for revision rhinoplasty. Your doctor will also explain the best approach to achieving your desired goals, sometimes using digital photography to show projected results, and ensure the best possible outcome.

I’m sorry you’re disappointed with your original surgeon. Particularly with revisionary surgery, which I perform on a regular basis when patients have had subpar results elsewhere, a physical, in-person examination would be necessary to accurately answer your question. Speaking in broad strokes, a revision surgery would likely be an option to make your bridge slimmer; it’s just a question of the best modality to accomplish this.

Whilst most of your nose looks good I do agree that the upper part of your bridge does look wide. I do believe this can be improved. It would involve re-fracturing the bones paying particular attention to the radix