Do my veneers look uneven/unflush with each other (the front two). And do you see any translucency? (Photo)

Your case illustrated the importance of the "try in" of the veneers prior to permanently bonding them.  You mention you did this very "quickly".  If you indeed did give your consent that you were happy at this "try in", then your dentist has a valid point in not correcting this issue without charging you. (Although I would not do this).  

Be assertive in advising your dentist that you are not happy with the 2 front teeth for the valid reasons which you describe and ask him/her how it can be fixed.  If he/she is unwilling then you must get a 2nd opinion to correct the problem.



Steven Goldy, DDS

First of all congratulations to you and your dentist on a gorgeous smile!!

Secondly,  I do see what you're concerned about. I don't think it's anything serious and it can be easily addressed. You should be ecstatic about your smile and in this case I don't feel your expectations are unreasonable. 

I would recommend you schedule a post op visit with your dentist and discuss you concerns. Some minor adjustments can deliver that perfect smile you're looking for!

Nothing is perfect. If you get a magnifying glass out, everything will fail under scrutiny. The posted photos look very good, and I'm sure none of your friends/family notice anything but a beautiful smile. Can they be redone and improved? Maybe. But some remakes end up looking worse instead of better.