Yes this will need to be revised.
You need to find an oculoplastic surgeon to make this repair. I suspect that what happen here is the result of the surgeon not properly dissecting the levator aponeurosis tendon. If this is correct, it should be possible for a properly trained surgery to profoundly improve your result provided you have normal levator function in this eyelid. Now here is the bad news, I would recommend letting this heal for 4 to 6 months at this point before having it revised.
Left eye low post op
You have residual ptosis on the left. You should wait until about 6 months and then have a revision. Sometimes the levator can be advanced more. Or the mullers muscle can be shortened